Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to shared freely.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
People of the world should thank each and everyone who immensely contributed the vast information on most of the things under and above the sky. Knowledge is power. This knowledge made us to lead our life easier, happier and convenient. However, like everything has its own pros and cons unfortunately sharing information has its own advantages and disadvantages.
Any information that promotes our being to health, joy and prosperity when used in a proper way can be shared. Industrial wise, knowing about the new machinery and how to use them helps the company to meet good production rate in less time. Academically, one can have deep knowledge on a particular subject that helps them to get a desire career. In medical fields, information could help people to prevent certain deadly diseases from attacking. For instance, a doctor from Ireland made a pill that can cure cancer from the scientific information he obtained from internet.
Where as, information in wrong hands could completely keep the people off from the face of the earth. Information on fields like nuclear mechanisms and medical fields has to keep hidden. For example, if terrorists are able to find the information on production of particular weapon, they could cause massive damage to the society in all areas. At the same way, information about the criminal law and genetic science could cause criminals to commit crimes in certain way and escape from being guilty.
In my opinion, sharing knowledge to some extent is fine as long as it goes well. But, few fields must have most security to keep them hidden for the sake of safety of humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...to health, joy and prosperity when used in a proper way can be shared. Industrial wise, knowing...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...rmation he obtained from internet. Where as, information in wrong hands could compl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...out the criminal law and genetic science could cause criminals to commit crimes i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0295202952 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72451694917 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608856088561 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6125218189 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147441560478 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462843804163 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364111019727 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854343249464 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121534532027 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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