We live in a technological age. However, technology cannot solve all the world's problems. Therefore some people argue that we need to place less emphasis on technological solutions and more on other values
In this modern era, it is impossible to imagine the world without technology. There's no doubt that technology have made our lives easier, faster and convenient. Infact, It is by the usage of advanced technology the development of any nation is decided. However, does technology can fill every need of human being is what is being discussed below.
From the starting of the era, since stone age, man has been putting his effort to make things easier and better for him and for the future generations. Today, technology is seen everywhere in the most basic and normal needs. Furthermore, it helps us in getting diagnosis of our physical being, it tracks our movements through GPS, it helped in solving cases, it is used for advanced academics etc., Eventually, people got benefitted by technology in their academic and professional career.
But, according to the reports on human mental health, people are becoming more depressed when technology is advancing. This is because due to the less interaction with each other. For example, drones are delivering food orders safe and fast by keeping full stop to the delivery boy and receiver relationship. Therefore, the distance between human beings is causing the depletion in the values as people treat each other like they treat machines. Which is, they always want their needs to be fulfilled and not even thinking of what others need. If, such behavioural traits was observed in an alarming state then society will become more dangerous for future generations to live.
According to me, usage of technology should be done in extremely necessary things and keep alive human interactions so the values and ethics will remain intact. Finally, i feel they both should go hand in hand to have a strong Ethical and technological foundation for future society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
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Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, i feel, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09764309764 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69431808682 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656565656566 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3548917438 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.933333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233441377166 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740603777776 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374109909532 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13553855388 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322515672693 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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