Life was simpler wihout so much of technology. Do you agree ?
People of the world should thank advanced technology for its immense contribution to the society as it has made our lives easier, faster and convenient. However, despite it's positives there is dark and ugly side of it that causes many negative effects. Both advantages and disadvantages are discussed below before coming to final verdict.
First and fore most thing is technology affecting our social lives as people are always glued to their mobiles and laptops while travelling and walking instead of enjoying natures beauty. Also, they prefer not to start a new conversation with people around which thins the human connections. Secondly, excessive usage of technology leads to sedentary life style through which new health problems like eye dryness, posture problems, heart issues and obesity arises in an increasing rate day by day. As a repercussion for all the above stated facts, the average longevity of living years is rapidly decreasing due to lack of physical activity and emotional support from our society.
Form simple thing to complex issue, we rely on technology. For instance, students for projects and solving mathematic problems they rely google for answers instead of working on it on their own which is inturn affecting their critical thinking skills. Mean while, machines and robotic technology has replaced people which eventually lead to unsecured future for present and upcoming generations. Another most important thing to mention is people often write emails to closed ones which seldom lead to misunderstandings leaving relationships to hang vulnerable.
In my opinion, though they are many benefits of modern technology, negatives outweigh the positives. Finally, I agree with the statement that life would be more simpler without so much of technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 253, Rule ID: MEAN_WHILE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'meanwhile'?
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...fecting their critical thinking skills. Mean while, machines and robotic technology has re...
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Line 13, column 157, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: simpler
...e with the statement that life would be more simpler without so much of technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44802867384 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78369816533 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68458781362 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0651712251 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0914638220068 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386724080665 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953829747829 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803298873256 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119930663152 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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