It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city, while others believe that life is better in countryside.
Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.
In the last decades, choosing a right place dwell in is a challenge for most people. While some people believe that urban area is better place to live in, I believe that rural area is best option for people to have better life.
On the one hand, people think that life is better in a city as they often have more accessibility to variety of job options. This is because most of local or multinational companies opt to open their factories and their main offices in the city. If people have more employment opportunities in their hometown, they would not be thinking of city as a better place to settle in to face the fact that they must live in a city to be able to find job in order to support their families. However, I feel that health is also important for better life.
Despite this, advocates countryside as better place in is because of the low levels of pollution. That is to say that the fact that most of the factories are in a city which results in low air quality, people, consequently, likes countryside where both noise and air quality are very good sense existing the causes of polluted air are less or unavailable. Therefore, I believe life in the rural area is better as it is more beneficial for people's health, which result in a better life.
In conclusion, although, some believe that cities are best option to live in since more job option are available for them, I firmly believe that countryside better place for people health as the pollution levels are very low, which will result in better life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...e to live in, I believe that rural area is best option for people to have better life. ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ption for people to have better life. On the one hand, people think that life ...
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Line 13, column 51, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
...ion, although, some believe that cities are best option to live in since more job option...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, i feel, in conclusion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49843322805 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458181818182 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9470086371 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23429338421 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109291936284 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779490925084 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163808976206 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258733304084 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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