Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.
Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.
In the little over a decade, the usage of technology has increased in education. Although, some people argue that this will result to negative effects, I agree with others who feel that it is a good approach.
On the one hand, it could be argued that using computer in the learning institutions can lead to negative impacts as it will harm the person's health. That is to say that students and teachers often will be in front of the computer most of the time, thus, they will be more exposed to the screen lights, which might results to some eye related problems, such as, visual impairment students or teachers visual ability could get affected badly, then it would be better not to adopt the usage to technology in education.
On the other hand, I agree with those who feel that there are more arguments to suggest usage of technology as a positive trend because it facilitate the access to information. This means that having computer at the classrooms will help the educators to search and get the information at a short time and facilitate it to the students during the session itself. For example, according to a recent study done by The Networking Magazine in the UK, since schools started using computers in education, 65% of teachers were able to complete their whole program on time compared to the previews years.
In conclusion, although the usage of technology in education might affect the person's health negatively, I firmly believe that the utilisation of computer in education centers is an appropriate approach as it will benefit positively both the educators and students in getting the information require faster.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...to negative impacts as it will harm the persons health. That is to say that students an...
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Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'facilitates'?
Suggestion: facilitates
...chnology as a positive trend because it facilitate the access to information. This means t...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...echnology in education might affect the persons health negatively, I firmly believe tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97111913357 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68052425573 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552346570397 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.8787798071 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.125 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.625 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246238094482 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102081225465 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547054510562 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139762205582 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549084617934 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.