Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to seek your assistance in finding the bag that I have lost while traveling from Mumbai by "Rajdhani Express" yesterday and the train number is 1356, coach number c-6, and A-12 is the seat number.
The bag is black in color with leather finishing and manufactured by "American Tourister". On the front side, it has a logo of the manufacturer with red and silver lining along with its name embossed in blue. Furthermore, the handle of the bag is made of metal and also a pin code is mandatory to open the lock.
Last night, I boarded the train from the Mumbai terminal for Chandigarh and due to the shortage of space kept my bag beneath my seat. In the morning, I picked my other baggage and rushed to get off the train because I just woke up 5 minutes before its arrival at my destination. In this hustle, I forgot to pick my bag which was under my seat.
Taking everything into consideration, I kindly request you to make an announcement to all the stations next to my destination to check my bag and share an update as soon as possible. If you need any further details regarding the bag, please contact me on my mobile number registered with the railway authorities. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Deepak
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
... A-12 is the seat number. The bag is black in color with leather finishing and manufactured...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69298245614 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90860579806 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1427744411 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2727272727 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0958348433567 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401439495315 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411831080207 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561129429481 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514302837933 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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