The line graph illustrates the percentage of daily commuters in Toronto Metro system in July 2007. It can be clearly seen that the highest peak of the passengers utilized the service at around 8 in the morning and 6 in the evening, which approximately reached up to 400,000 people. However, its lowest peak garnered 100,000 commuters around 6 AM and 4 PM.
Let us take a closer look at their operation which started at 6 in the morning. It then rose up slowly to 200,000 around 7 AM. Then it was doubled at 8 AM to 400,000 respectively. In between 8 and 10 AM, there is a gradual fall before it slo...
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Then it was doubled at 8 AM to 400,000 respectively
Description: why 'respectively' here?
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'before it rapidly inclined to 400,000' should be 'before it rapidly inclined to 400,000 at 6 PM'.
Don't use 'then' a lot.
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