Dear Sir,
I am writing to seek your attention about an issue with the public transportation which is start happening for around three weeks ago.
I used to take bus number 207 from 8th circle to reach my work in Shimesani area. I have been using it since three years ago, I was very satisfied about the service but suddenly evey thing changed. Firstly it is not committed to the timeframe so there is a daily delay, which caused a problem at my work place, noting that my managers are accepting to arrive late but not each day, so these delays leads to deduct some amounts from my salary. Secondly the cleanness of the bus, it is dramatically decreased in that period. Sometimes I am not able to find a clean seat!
I suggest to check what is the problem with is bus, and try to update arriving times on the application, so we can consider another way of transportation if there is a delay with the bus.
I wish to hear from you soon and see changes on ground.
Yours sincerely,
Maha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...cle to reach my work in Shimesani area. I have been using it since three years ag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48633879781 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50672599952 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677595628415 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.298652511 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210487678521 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713063663425 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572580840478 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110770514448 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628530265174 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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