Some people think teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss posters views and give your own opinion.
It is thought that children are absolutely happier than other people however and the other side, others believe that adults are more satisfied. This paper will shed light on this debate, and moreover is going to put forth some reason to support the latter view.
To begin with, teenagers are not as responsible as a mature. So that they are much more stressless and calmer than the adults. Although child is not so hard working it does not have enough knowledge to manage its principles and life route. If as a child, an individual could decide for the lifestyle to be held, one could be really happy in this period of Life despite a grown person is captured by many responsibilities and tasks such a public member is free to decide about the tasks to be done to leave and what to fulfil in its own life, which makes the individual to feel free. More freedom a person benefits, considerably happier the individual is so that as a mature human is so happier than a child.
Furthermore having, the power to do the desires, one can feel happy. Although a teenager takes advantages of more free time, it does not have enough power to accomplish what it is desires. They just can play games and watch TV, unless parents or else help them achieve more goals, study books or do any other jobs; this prevents them being the happiest. on the other hand, a mature human not only can determine what to do, but also has the power to make it applicable. Being aware of what to do, a grown individual can try the best to accomplish it. Search persons who do they are vicious are the happiest and by far the most satisfied people and the earth, in my opinion. In conclusion, the power of doing the lifestyle to them by public members helped and experienced a satisfying live in which they are really interested.
To sum up, despite children are free to play and spend time, and even though they are Peaceful and calm, being free to choose their lifestyle and to live it, mature people are considerably happier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...th, teenagers are not as responsible as a mature. So that they are much more stressless ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
... human is so happier than a child. Furthermore having, the power to do the desires, on...
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Line 9, column 355, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
... this prevents them being the happiest. on the other hand, a mature human not only...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57063711911 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4472802377 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512465373961 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1246270422 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143344588349 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488811655523 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046794084614 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902896599772 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381206099412 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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