Majority of workforce is replacing humans to artificial intelligent robots. In my opinion, it is possible that unskilled jobs such as informing and selling will be replaced by robots but jobs that require specialized skills will remain to people. This essay will discuss about the reasons why most of the jobs will take over by artificially intelligent robots over the following years.
In the future, tasks that do not require abilities of human will be performed by machines. Because artificial intelligence could save the most important parts of humankind such as time and money. In the bank, for instance, some of the tellers replaced by ATM. It helps people to deposit or transfer money simpler. Moreover, it saves time, people do not need to stand in the line of the bank and it allows to serving 24/7 throughout until its expired date. For these reasons, most of the jobs possible to replaced by robots with artificial intelligent.
Conversely, there are some jobs that cannot be substituted by robots. The reasons are jobs that demand abilities that only humans have could not replaced by artificial intelligent machines. These jobs include psychology, education, and medicine etc. Machines will never replace these kinds of jobs that need “human touch” thousands of years.
In conclusion, significant number of people would be taken over by robots on their work fields. Labour that not require specific skills that only people have will definitely done by robots, other than that, people will always need in workforce with their educated abilities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'replace'
Suggestion: replace
...jobs such as informing and selling will replaced by robots but jobs that require special...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'remain'
Suggestion: remain
...bs that require specialized skills will remained to people. This essay will discuss abou...
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Line 1, column 315, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'take' or 'be taken'?
Suggestion: take; be taken
...t the reasons why most of the jobs will taken over by artificially intelligent robots...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'perform'
Suggestion: perform
... do not require abilities of human will performed by machines. Because artificial intelli...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e and money. In the bank, for instance, some of the tellers replaced by ATM. It helps peopl...
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Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: simpler
...lps people to deposit or transfer money more simpler. Moreover, it saves time, people do not...
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Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'serving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: serving
...d in the line of the bank and it allows to serve 24/7 throughout until its expired date....
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'replace'
Suggestion: replace
...ilities that only humans have could not replaced by artificial intelligent machines. The...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...dicine etc. Machines will never replace these kind of jobs that need 'human touch&apo...
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Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... workforce with their educated abilities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26587301587 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67014547745 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0354784857 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319358303694 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107517741628 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625969169439 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198039422062 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453947267178 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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