You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter:
Give detail of the job --
Explain why it is important to you –
Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.
Dear Sir,
I am writing a letter to procure a reference letter to apply for a new job in General Electric because they have a compulsory requirement to submit a letter from the formal teacher along with the résumé to qualify for the initial screening process.
Recently, the company name “General Electric” had advertised the role of a Talent Acquisition Manager based in Dubai, UAE. The job is to look after multiple projects in the middle east region including Egypt as they have recently opened an office out there. Also, the incumbent will travel to different countries to arrange recruitment drives.
In this regard, your reference letter would play an important role to qualify for the above-mentioned spot. Firstly, it’s a managerial role so it would help me to upgrade my skill and career ladder. Finally, I would be able to earn a handsome income to keep my family with me as they went back last year due to the expensive cost of living here in Dubai.
Would it be possible for you to highlight my leadership and team-building skills in your letter as it’s a senior role to manage the department of five recruiters?
I look forward to hearing a positive reply quickly as they have 25th as a cutoff date to apply.
Best Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98148148148 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83695831411 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4042466504 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.555555556 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218007574029 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067173447349 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968375068574 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114194012679 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105789712177 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.