You share a parking area with several neighbors and have recently started having problems.
Write a letter to be copied to all neighbors that share the parking area. In that letter
• explaining the problems
• suggesting ways to help the situation
• proposing a possible meeting
Dear neighbors,
I am writing to complain about the recent incidents in our shared parking area and suggest some feasible solutions. First of all, I have been having difficulty finding a vacant spot for more than a month now. It is really annoying to find my designated area occupied by other tenant's guest’s car whenever I arrive. Since I work a night shift, others assume I am traveling and it is fine to occupy my spot. In addition, yesterday I found some garbage left on the ground for the fourth time in this month and I had to put them in the garbage bin outside the house as it was starting to smell really bad.
I think it is necessary to introduce some rules to stop the chaos that has been forming for quite time now. Firstly, no one should occupy other neighbor's parking spot unless they have confirmed its availability with the owner. Secondly, we need to impose a fine for those who litter the parking or any shared place. Thirdly, it would be a good idea to install a camera in the parking area to monitor any suspicious activity and catch the culprits behind the garbage incidents.
A meeting could be held to discuss these predicaments in addition to other problems that others might have observed to improve the situation of our shared parking area. Some people might have an insight into how to overcome raised issues and come up with better solutions. Nonetheless, it is essential to deal with the situation before it gets out of hand.
I hope to meet you soon to discuss the matters furthers in person,
Sincerely yours,
Behnaz Yousefi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear neighbors, I am writing to complain about the recen...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... discuss the matters furthers in person, Sincerely yours, Behnaz Yousefi
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rthers in person, Sincerely yours, Behnaz Yousefi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, nonetheless, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, i think, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 277.0 206.0 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74729241877 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50157843536 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617328519856 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 290.88556701 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.4628646952 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.153846154 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 4.34317383033 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273144226715 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836043344973 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700511345504 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143517648927 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700462347725 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.