On recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
You have a neighbor who is often burning rubbish at their house. Write a complaint about it to the local council and say
–What is happening?
–How is your family harmed by that.
–What could be the solution, in your opinion.
Dear Local council,
The purpose of this letter is to bring to your attention an improper action by my unruly neighbour, John smith, who is lightening a fire at his house to burn various types of garbage.
this obnoxious neighbour is igniting his rubbish on a weekly basis, and below you will read the details of what is happening. Mr smith has a massive front yard, and each night he takes a large white plastic bag of trash, dumps it to the grass, pours gasoline, and ignite the entire amount. As the fire burns, he continue to pour more gasoline on the flame in an attempt to eliminate any evidence of the burned trash.
Ladies and gentlemen of the council, his action have become a serious health concern for the many of my family members. my parents who are in their 60's have been complaining of breathing and vision problems over the last couple of weeks. Even more concerning is that my son, who used to play with his friends in the courtyard, has stopped going out to play because of the fumes and polluted air.
As a council you have numerous options, but as a start, you should first give him well written request to cease and desist. If that, does not work, a second suggestion would be that the council use its power to fine him heavily until he complies with your request.
Please seriously consider my request for immediate action to be taken.
Best regards,
Adam Symons
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... burn various types of garbage. this obnoxious neighbour is igniting his rub...
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Line 13, column 313, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'continues'.
Suggestion: continues
...he entire amount. As the fire burns, he continue to pour more gasoline on the flame in a...
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Line 19, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...cern for the many of my family members. my parents who are in their 60s have been ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.744 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31727080852 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5493556667 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.818181818 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15631440241 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539688516266 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587105951203 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066427653554 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436212914894 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.