online pharmacies
The reading passage argues that many problems are associated with online pharmacies and it would in the public's interest to ban internet-based drugstores. However, the speaker in the lecture casts doubt on the claims made in the article. He mentions that buying medications online offers customers a multitude of benefits and abolishing e-pharmacies could have unfavorable ramifications.
To begin with, the author maintains that the herbal drugs from these sources are not approved by the food and drug adminstration since they do not meet the recommended guidelines. Nevertheless, the lecturer offsets this point of view by declaring that Although no approval was issued for these medicines, this should not deter consumers from purchasing them as other countries have been using them for hundreds of years and they never harmed anyone. The listening further delineates an example to illustrate the strong safety record of these remedies. According to the lecture, the morning-after pill has been administered as a way of birth control in France even though it's not tested in the US.
On top of that, the writer is worried about people bypassing the doctor's consultation and directly ordering medicines from these websites. Given the fact that the knowledge of most individuals in the medical field is limited, they might select medications of severe adverse effects or of a wrong dosage, which would end up doing more harm than good for the patients. In contrast, the professor in the lecture indicates that in addition to the high cost of a doctor's visit, people have to wait long period of time to get seen by a professional and online pharmacies could overcome this problem. Plus, the lecturer brings up the fact that the internet is filled with a huge number of articles about drugs, which are written by pharmaceutical companies and specialists. Thus, by reading these online resources, consumers are competent enough to make decisions about their own health.
Lastly, the excerpt postulates that the origins of these herbal remedies is not known since they are manufactured in foreign nations, which do not hold the same standards as the US, even if the labels and the instructions may be in English. The lecturer, on the other hand, asserts that these online outlets provide patients with lower prices than ordinary brick-and-mortar pharmacies. Hence, we should not blame the consumer for seeking cheaper alternatives given the fact of rising heathcare costs in the United States.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 66, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...r is worried about people bypassing the doctors consultation and directly ordering medi...
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Line 9, column 499, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...doctors visit, people have to wait long period of time to get seen by a professional and onlin...
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Line 13, column 523, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g heathcare costs in the United States.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, in contrast, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 30.3222958057 181% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1373.03311258 153% => OK
No of words: 401.0 270.72406181 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2493765586 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85354568791 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 145.348785872 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598503740648 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 419.366225166 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1713416436 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.333333333 110.228320801 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7333333333 21.698381199 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06452816374 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184828319961 0.272083759551 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634684118995 0.0996497079465 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987179816631 0.0662205650399 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128248792758 0.162205337803 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122148335407 0.0443174109184 276% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.3589403974 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.42419426049 116% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 63.6247240618 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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