The pie chart describes the principal cause of the declining production of agricultural areas, while the table illustrates the effects of land degradation on three areas of the world in the year 1990.
It can be clearly seen in the pie chart that overgrazing represents more than half of the proportion, which was 35%, that causes land mutilation globally while other causes remained the lowest at 7%. This was followed by deforestation at 30% and over utilized land with less than 2% than the former.
However, in the outcome of land destruction by the region, Europe achieved the highest in deforestation and over-cultivation with 9.8% and 7.7%, and it also attained the pinnacle of 23% compared to the other three regions, while the percentage in over-grazing was garnered by Oceania at 11.3%, and this stands the second with 13%. North America stocked in its lowest values in all trends with overall total of 5%.
In conclusion, both data depicted a vast difference in their given trends.
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