Telecommuting' refers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of each week and communicating with their office using computer technology. Telecommuting is growing in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming decades.
How do you think society will be affected by the growth of telecommuting?
The development of technology especially the invention of laptops has facilitated the working from home. It is a recent trend that is being used in many countries. Although, it has some advantages on working people i think that it is disadvantages on the society are more.
Firstly, working from home has a positive impact on people. Starting with the problem of traffic jam that will be solved since people will not take their cars or the public transportation to get to their job. As a result, people will feel less frustrated and more relaxed. In addition, working in a company will lead to lot of distractions since the environment is too crowded so the productivity of the person will be affected .For example, an office with a huge number of employees will not perform well .
<p>Secondly, telecommuting will affect the society in anegative way. In fact, people will be less sociable they will not be able tomeet at the lunch break like they usually used to do. For instance, regulartraining will be less interactive since they are conducted on the computers andusers are not able to see the expressions of each other’s. On the top of that,working from home will make the person affected by his family, For example , a mother will for sure leave her laptop several time during the day tolook after her children . This option is not applicable if she is doing her job from her office.
</p><p>In conclusion, since telecommuting is growing in a fast way in those days , Companies and society should recheck for her pros and cons to prevent any future issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87732342007 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86258053044 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4999866731 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.923076923 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201642859131 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722319215502 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368284258269 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11537701977 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267965915473 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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