Many people believe that exploiting animals by humans unethical. However, another group of people think that to satisfy needs such as food & research is acceptable
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Since the inception of life on earth, human beings have been utilizing animals to meet their requirements and this has been a controversial topic. Whilst some opine that it is immoral to do so, I would completely agree with those who deem that this approach is acceptable. This essay will discuss both sides, and explain my belief that it is totally justifiable to use animals.
On one side, it is injustice to animals as their life is treated to be of less importance over humans’ life. Killing animals to enjoy a meal is a sinful act in many religions such as Hindu, and Buddhisim so should be avoided.
Additionally, they can feel pain when medical experiments are conducted on them unsuccessfully and eventually could die to life-threatening diseases. Risking non-human life to benefit from it is thus not acceptable.
Nevertheless, it is vital to consider the amount of progress in human disease prevention and food resources being done due to usage of animals. People could die early from illness, if animals were not used in scientific experiments to find the effective cures. Moreover, some animal products ,for instance, milk does not harm animals in fact society takes care of the animals which is beneficial to them as well in return. Undeniably, to maintain food-chain it is imperative to use animals otherwise human beings would die of starvation.
In conclusion, I completely concur as evident from above analysis that animals are quintessential to satiate numerous societal need. Even though others think due to religious beliefs and risks involved animals should not be eaten or used by researchers, it is crucial to do so as there is no alternative effective way to conduct research. Thus, since numerous lives have been saved due to contribution of animals in medical science and food it is agreeable to use them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ven though others think due to religious beliefs and risks involved animals shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11740890688 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01530568655 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651821862348 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9460739236 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2307692308 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139679485353 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464894284133 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249280682937 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696283128932 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328869997092 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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