Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
Some countries adopt strict strategies to deal with extensive crime. It is practiced as such not only to ensure justice to the bereaved but also to alert other individuals to strain away from such activities.Countries like Saudi, Australia practice death penalty to violent criminals with an aim to reduce such activities in the country thereby ensuring safety to its citizens.
It is justifiable that punishments play significant role in reducing crime rate. On the other hand, I don't believe its fair to be a judge to a person 's percious life. Moreover if such harsh rules are adopted there is a possibility of punishing an innocent man who may fall victim to other 's personal interest.
There are individuals who commit murder for self defence For example, if a person is being raped to get rescued from the situation they may brutally kill the person which can be an outcome of the emotions ,though its not right along with doesn't deserve capital punishment.
In conclusion, Every human being has the right to live. Opportunity should be given to all to confess over their crime. Death Penalty is a quick punishment and it hardly gives time for a person to repent and correct self.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93103448276 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79422832059 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665024630542 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.8391527522 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.222222222 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166560688312 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627712565787 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669258815301 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962627476122 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252827468925 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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