Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion
Application of law in terms of social justice and retribution has been a debatable issue in all the societies. Certain individuals suppose that death penalty is advisable for brutal criminals, whereas others think such a measure is obsolete in the modern world. Although capital punishment may be considered a crucial instrument of retaliation in some cases, I believe that judicial branch defies perfection, which likely leads to error of judgment.
On the one hand, some cruel crimes like mass murder and molestation ought to be taken seriously by the government; and deprivation of a life of a those who commit them seems logical and fair. This means that offenders, who otherwise would be sent to serve their term in prison until the end of their days, appear not to suffer as they should. Furthermore, applying death penalty would be just not only for families of the victims but also for the society at a whole. This is because, capital punishment plays a preventive role in social relationships. For example, one of the most notorious serial killers of today Charles Manson, gained his fame by brutally killing innocent victims; being sentenced to prison he showed other mentally ill human beings who tried to mimic his behaviour that the law was not strict enough in terms of severity of the level of a crime.
On the other hand, even though some of the felony ought to be intuitively punished by death, the vital role in ascertaining whether a person is considered guilty or not plays the judicial system which in many cases lacks objectivity and has easy to be fooled. In other words, huge percentage of errors do occur when the guilt of a certain person is determined.
Therefore, innocent members of society can lose their lives for the actions of others, true murderers. For instance, in the Soviet Union times of maniac Chikatilo two people were executed by mistake while the real killer was committing his atrocious deeds. Proceeding from this, no modern society is able to be error-free in terms of implementing capital punishment.
In conclusion, although a large number of offences require severe approach, I reckon that execution of a human being ought to be out of a realm of punitive branches of legislation. This is due to the fact that no country has a flawless system of justice.
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, in many cases, in other words, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95897435897 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73622303592 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592307692308 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1629869075 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.933333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9333333333 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173078797057 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550566622558 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487408855716 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883440708569 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525994321871 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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