Nowadays some people get married in their 30 s age rather tahn marrying at younger age what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Thesedays, the trend is juvenile to attain marriage life when they will turn into 30 s age compared to age factor of 18-26. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of latter marriage is that young one want well settled in their life with sufficient income whereas, they no make strong relationship each other because the maturity level is rise when age increase, it is one demerits.
To begin with, youngome have no show keen interest to get earlier marriage because they want to fulfill the ambitious of life. To explain it more, they completed an academic qualification in the 30s age and earn a satisfaction income to fullfill necessities of life to maintain balance between them. As an instance, the oxford university reported that 73% of adolescents unmarried who under age 30 s and study in a university.
However, the demerits of 30 age married couple cannot make a strong relationship bond because they attain maturitylevel . To say it more, the adolescents no express emotions with each other. A reason is that they are only focus on the job work and behavior is turn into tired mood. Although, they have free time for leisure activities but his mind not properly free from burden, thus, they are not capable an enhance love affection towards relation. for example, the times of Network conducted a survey and found that one third of latteral marriage people ended married life with divorce rates in the United Kingdom.
To conclude, the age is 30 for wedding is worthwhile juvenile if maintain relationship with each other by income and recreational activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: couples
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...by income and recreational activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, third, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99248120301 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70570155117 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582706766917 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6063845531 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.727272727 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168002441145 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670031600944 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562693277842 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105580248487 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225390202288 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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