TPO 51
The author of the passage asserts that human has long been interested in elephant and it causes that elephants have some fascinating behaviors and features for human. Nevertheless, the lecturer finds the features which are proposed by passage dubious and casts doubts on behaviors proposed by reading passages.
First of all, the reading states that elephants will be aware of the issue that they will die soon. In other words, when they become old and weak, they understand that they are nearing the end of their lives. For this reason, they break away from their herds and say alone to specific locations where are at the adjacency of water (elephant graveyard) to die alone and this idea is substantiated by their bones which are discovered at this place. In contrast, the lecturer repudiates this idea and declares that they break away from their herds in order to find more suitable foods. It is crystal clear that when elephants become older, it is hard for them to chew some kind of vegetables. So, as a possible solution, they go to some specific places so as to find softer vegetation to eat and usually these kinds of vegetation are located near the water.
Furthermore, the author claims that elephants could learn to hold a paintbrush in their trunk and utilize them on canvas. Conversely, the professor dismisses the idea due to the fact that elephants' ears are so sensitive and it can be a great tool for the human to learn them how to paint in a tricky way. In other words, they are just painting lines which learned and they repeated these ways by touching. Ultimately, it is not necessary that they should be flowers or other elephants.
Finally, the reading holds the view that elephants are afraid of mice. this belief is emanated from Roman philosopher who states that elephants are terrified by mouse, even more than dangerous animals such as tigers or lions. On the contrary, the professor brings up the idea that they are not afraid of them. they react to them because they are not familiar with this kind of animal. Moreover, she mentioned some kind of elephants which live in the zoos and when they faced mouse, they did not react to them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 749, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...lution, they go to some specific places so as to find softer vegetation to eat and usual...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a tricky way" with adverb for "tricky"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...or the human to learn them how to paint in a tricky way. In other words, they are just painting...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...view that elephants are afraid of mice. this belief is emanated from Roman philosoph...
^^^^
Line 7, column 311, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... idea that they are not afraid of them. they react to them because they are not fami...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, as to, in contrast, kind of, such as, first of all, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 12.0772626932 182% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 22.412803532 236% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 30.3222958057 158% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1373.03311258 131% => OK
No of words: 377.0 270.72406181 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75331564987 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42467596513 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490716180371 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 419.366225166 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8890094083 49.2860985944 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.411764706 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1764705882 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06452816374 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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