“Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and
resist unjust laws.”
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In
developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or
examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The statement which claims people should obey the rules which think is truely adjusted and ignore the others that may seem unreliable is not convincing. Although there are several legislation which look like strange, ignoring the rules could lead to chaos or diorganizing. Likewise, in the most democratic countries, laws are introducing by parlimants which are a good prospective of the societies. On the other hand, in dictator countries not all of the rules make hardship for indiviuals. I will explain these reasons explicity in this issue.
The most important reason that people should respect the legislation in the country is that disobeying rules would lead to chaos and all it would be detriment for the society. For example, driving rules are desigened by the government to provide safe roads and streets for indivisulas but some one may believe speed limit is not good rule and obey that. Apart from the fine that they may expose, it can make streets like car race competition that no one would be safe. In other type of legislation, similar event could happen. For instance, a person may think prison for murder is not enough and decide to execute killer. So, no one could feel safety in the country.
Another reason that should be considered is that the origin of the most of the legislation is parlimants which are elected directly or indirectly by indivisuals in democratic countries. Parliman's members attend in a number of meetings to introduce a law which need hours of discusing and hearing different ideas. Therefore, the results of these meeting should be a reliable rules which indicates general prespectives of natives. Then, if there is any rule that indivisul is not satisfy by that, he or she can talk with parlimant's member and request to change it. It would be good idea for some rule which seem starnge.
Some may maintain that in some countires which does not have democratic system all of the process of introducing legislation are incorrect and disobey the rules is the final approach that they can follow. I believe, in these societies , there are lots of laws that are useful and beneficial to follow and help the society to improve. Therefore, if this culture spread in the country that disobey rules are great behaviour then it would be difficult to change that and all of the legislation would not respected.
In conclusion, I reckon, although in some countries there is not any reliable process for introducing and changing legislation, all of the people should follow the rules to protect the society from its detriment consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun legislation seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some legislation'.
Suggestion: some legislation
...e is not convincing. Although there are several legislation which look like strange, ignoring the r...
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Line 1, column 445, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e other hand, in dictator countries not all of the rules make hardship for indiviuals. I w...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...e roads and streets for indivisulas but some one may believe speed limit is not good rul...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion that no one would be safe. In other type of legislation, similar event could...
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Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'satisfied'.
Suggestion: satisfied
...there is any rule that indivisul is not satisfy by that, he or she can talk with parlim...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'maintains'.
Suggestion: maintains
...ome rule which seem starnge. Some may maintain that in some countires which does not h...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s which does not have democratic system all of the process of introducing legislation are ...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...an follow. I believe, in these societies , there are lots of laws that are useful ...
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Line 7, column 469, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...t would be difficult to change that and all of the legislation would not respected. In c...
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Line 7, column 502, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'respect'
Suggestion: respect
...at and all of the legislation would not respected. In conclusion, I reckon, although in...
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Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...r introducing and changing legislation, all of the people should follow the rules to prote...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, look, may, so, then, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2149.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98607888631 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7070618652 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4686774942 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9583162987 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.45 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.55 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0965685315089 0.243740707755 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351941087718 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348620219484 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629035278039 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400783150055 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.