Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
We should pay attention to the opinions of famous people.
Throughout the world famous people are the seat of other people’s focus and sometimes followed by them. Although they can have beneficial influence on others, but trusting in every thing they believe or think would not be thoughtful. The following essay supports this point of view.
Obviously, according to the particular experiences that the famous people could have, their opinions can be worthy of thinking. They had the opportunity to face different situations and people due to their special relationships and positions. In addition, they have gained essential knowledge and specific skills while reaching their achievements. Therefore they can convey these valuable lessons through their thoughts and ideas. For instance, a successful actor can help others who are seeking to carry out a perfect performance in cinema industry since he can provide them helpful skills and techniques of being effective.
However, we can always call for help and guiding advices from any other proficient people in that specific field of career or even from advisors who are specialized in advising people about their education and occupation. And there would be no necessity for imitating and idolizing our favorite famous people when making critical decisions about our lives. Furthermore, famous people like others are human beings and may make mistakes or even have fallacious creeds. Therefore, sometimes it can be harmful to believe in what they say or think. In other words, we would rather analyze their notions and only extract the beneficial ones to use.
In conclusion, we can think about popular people’s points of view, but we should consider their probable faults or erroneous thoughts.
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Comments
Is it correct now? Throughout
Is it correct now?
Throughout the world famous people are the seat of other people’s focus and sometimes followed by other people.
Yes, but not developed well.
Yes, but not developed well. The words 'other people' are duplicated.
and sometimes followed by them
Description: 'them' refers to what?
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