A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.
Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.
1- Say where you went,
2- Where you stayed,
3- What you can do there
4- What the food was like.
Dear Garima,
hope this letter will find you in radiant and best of spirit. I am sending you the details of Rudraprayag place situated in Uttrakhand, where I stayed during my journey of Kedarnath.
this is a place where two holy rivers named Mandakini and alaknanda connect with each other and convert into the Ganga. this place is very peaceful and the view of both river connectionsis mesmerize. A heritage name Kali Kamli also situated on the bank of river alaknanda, where you can hire rooms as per you requirement.
you can enjoy there the beauty of nature and also see some rare temple situated in india like God Brahma. there is no temple in other place all over the india. Moreover, youngsters visit this place for mountain treaking, because of large rocky mountains. you have a chance to experience this adventure personally.
As far as food is concerned, it was awesome authentic food of hills rice and lentil curry, which will not create burden on you stomach and very easy to digest.
hope these kinds of knowledge will help you to enjoy maximum over there and one more thing try to spend atleast 1 week in the lap of nature, which we all miss in our area.
have a safe journey.
Yours truly
Raju
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| 2020-01-03 | camp.vandna@gmail.com | 89 | view |
| 2019-08-20 | bhatvishal@ | 89 | view |
| 2019-07-25 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-25 | bhatvishal@ | 89 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39377234191 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646511627907 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5158467755 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3846153846 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283428988022 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955891824289 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618704257973 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124424207292 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650813827489 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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