The only effective way to deal with unemployment is to introduce rapid urbanaization. How far do you agree.
Nowadays unemployment is quite popular in todays world. Some people think urbanaization would change its faith. Though in this essay I would discuss urbanaization is not the effective way to tackle unemployment.
Ofcourse, there are many reasons that people support rapid urbanaization. Firsty, urbanaization opens lot of opportunities for public sector. Lot of corprates would come to the party and huge job openings will be available. Due to large amount of industrialization, better housing, good hospitals and education will be devoloped in those areas. This improves the lifestyle of diiferent people.
Eventhough, we have merits in urbanaization there are more demerits. The population in the urban areas were higher than the rural areas, this causes uneven population distribution. Due to rapid urbanaization huge amount of traffic will gets increased, also the air gets unbreathable this causes lunges problem. For example, Chennai is one of the most populated city, the people tend to move to the cities and the rural areas been untouched. This also puts lots of pressure in resoures, housing and education. Huge level of crimes will get increased. Large amount of population increases great competition on jobs.
To conclude, rapid urbanaization is not the proper solution to deal with unemployment, otherwise we would come across with lot of difficuties. Therefore spreading education is one of the best way to increase the better life style for poor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48245614035 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12100776079 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7874732986 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5294117647 104.977214359 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4117647059 20.9669160288 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 7.25397266985 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941733949008 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286402743171 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458915060776 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692061380061 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488449289151 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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