Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
You should write at least 250 words.
School uniforms are mandatory for students in certain high schools while some schools allow students to dress casually. Whether or not schools should make uniforms compulsory is highly debatable. This essay will discuss why wearing uniforms to school is superior with relevant examples and evidence to support this argument.
Firstly, uniforms display a sense of discipline and seriousness. It subtly encourages the child to form a routine and follow it diligently, thereby reinforcing the importance of education. For instance, students often look up to doctors, pilots, scientists and learn that wearing a uniform comes with commitment and responsibility. This will help students to take schooling more formally and diligently. Moreover, this could also help parents save time in getting their kids dressed in the morning.
Secondly, wearing casual outfits to school can create a lot of conflicts due to the disparity between the students that come from a wealthy family as opposed to those who don’t. For the latter, the kids can feel less privileged and act out which could further lead to bullying or fights in school. For example, there have been many cases of bullying in some countries for this very reason. Implementing standard clothing for all the students will encourage equality and healthy competition amongst children.
To conclude, school policies that include uniforms are far better than those that don’t, primarily because it helps lay a more disciplined behaviour amongst kids and at the same time avoid a casual approach to learning and education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42914979757 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76196456562 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635627530364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9215951314 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.153846154 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312681222673 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111563527753 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108228035658 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191817254147 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122622631714 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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