Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions in this?
Nutrition is one of the necessities of human life. To keep up with today's fast-paced world, people increasingly prefer fast food is being to cooking. While some people view this as a positive change, in my view, its adverse effects over wags its benefits.
Because fast food has little to no nutritional value, this trend is harmful to public health. According to various researches, fast food consumption has been linked to many health problems, like obesity, hypertension, and elevated blood sugar levels. This trend is driven purely by commercial interests by individuals who want to make money by compromising public health. I believe that individuals and governments should be wary of this trend and should take steps to reduce the consumption of these junk foods.
Some people might argue that fast food is a necessity in today's fast-moving lifestyle. They might also say that increased consumption of fast food might offer some support to the local economy, as it helps to generate employment. However, I believe that public health is much more critical.
To conclude, although the increasing popularity of fast food has some benefits, in my opinion, this is an alarming trend. The damage this trend is causing to public health is much more dangerous than the little help that it provides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15962441315 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74827997602 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6535297949 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5833333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294151329045 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109548424393 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840392981386 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188667488103 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586222455584 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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