We live in an era full of opportunities. Some people grab opportunities with the strength of their sheer skill and others with their educational value. The world is changing after the millenium, the degree that you hold is not the only pillar for getting a job anymore. Some say the reason might be the costly university education. This essay will argue that expensive university education is not the only reason for this cause.
The job market is getting competitive at an exponential rate. The companies wants their employees to be the best in the industry in order to maintain their position and reptutation in the market. So the need for skillful employees is in high demand. For instance, Google recently changed their hiring policy that shook the industry. They announced that from now on, Google will take the job interviews without the need for degrees. This incident suggests that degrees are now not the apex priority for jobs and skills are the real gamechanger.
University education does not guarantee skillful students. The cost surely is one of the reason why some brilliant students are not able to get the degree. However, not all universities are same nor all the students are same. Everybody has different skillset. The companies do not want a student with higher value of degree, rather the company wants the one with an experience and a unique skillset. The type of degree does not matter as long as the employee does his job with integrity and skillfully.
In conclusion, this essay argured that a well experienced person without a degree has far better chances of getting a job compared to a person with two master's degree with little skillset.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'want'.
Suggestion: want
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95390070922 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65138455308 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0003654953 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6111111111 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203920242616 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555239965782 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602340645541 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139637988026 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714535388374 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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