More and more people are relying on the private car at their major meant of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
Now a days people become more privacy conscious and economy of under development countries are much steadier than ever so people spend money over buying things like private vehicle for each person in home. Due to that reason global warming problem gets raise all over the world.
Education level of people get increased over the time, in addition they become more health and time conscious. In compare to past two centuries, business in every area gets increase with that people understand importance of time. Generally in countries, inter-city public transport are much slower compare to travel same amount of distance by private vehicle. Also, there is a chance to get infected by someones disease like Ebola, chikungunya etc. In respect to these two reasons people like use their private vehicle to go one place to another.
There are many ways we can defeat problems which are generated due to private transportation. Government can promote people to use more and more electric vehicles which can not produce any type of pollution. Also, Government can improve quality of people transport make it more feasible to use there locals. Government can introduce some rules like chinese government, In china number of licence plat approved are limited of each year, also each day of the week there are specific group of numbered vehicles are allowed to drive. Within the two-year chinese government reduces 33% of country's pollution.
In conclusion, Every person on earth understands cause which they made via private vehicle then they are the ones who can get control over causes and global warming.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-02 | gladz0917 | 67 | view |
| 2019-03-28 | gmail234 | 78 | view |
| 2019-03-03 | kalppatel | 73 | view |
| 2019-02-07 | farzad.rahmati_1989 | 84 | view |
| 2018-12-27 | lamngo1911 | 56 | view |
- There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem? 78
- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 73
- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 61
- More and more people are relying on the private car at their major meant of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution. 73
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days people become more privacy conscious an...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'someones'' or 'someone's'?
Suggestion: someones'; someone's
...o, there is a chance to get infected by someones disease like Ebola, chikungunya etc. In...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
...each day of the week there are specific group of numbered vehicles are allowed to dri...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16858237548 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50405932823 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613026819923 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4721450597 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.769230769 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200617456198 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736534320286 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523317995884 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117070534125 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311456347426 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.