It is well known that the craze of communication technology is gradually increasing on both individuals and organizations instead of interaction with people in person. These bring substantial benefits as well as drawbacks to both individuals and companies.
On the one hand, communication technology is advantageous for both individuals and businesses. That is to say, with the high-speed of internet connection, company managers can create any meeting and video conference with various client worldwide from their specific cubical area. As a result, companies saves lots of time and outside allowance expenditure. Moreover, organizations also use communication technology in the form of e-mail by record all written data. To be more specific, sometimes, it is difficult for humankind to remember all necessaries information, but with e-message people can recall vital information to avoid misconception in future. For individuals, online communication is a great channel to bring people together through social networking sites such as Facebook and Instagram. One clear example, most of the people have a social account, from where they can get brief information about others lifestyle and history or even with chatting, allow them to know each other better. As well as, couples who have a long-distance relationship, do not have to struggle with expensive international call fees, they can use popular video call application such as WhatsApp and Facebook Messenger as they require affordable internet charges.
On the other hand, there are also some severe drawbacks of communication technology for both individuals and industries. Regarding individuals, any controversial person can create conflict between religious people by viral the misleading videos online, thus numerous innocent people can lost their lives by terrorists in the name of justice. Also, virtual gamers spend too much time on online games with other players, this could cause a negative impact on their mind and health. One of the most unsettling consequences of e-communication technology is the loss of confidential data and information by cybercrime activity. To put it more simple, professional hackers can trap and manipulate people online with phishing method, could steal account password and other relevant data effortlessly. This matters not only to individuals in this society but also to businesses.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that communication technology is now an indispensable part of connecting with people as well as at work. However, it is noticeable that the utilization of communication technology is both advantageous and disadvantageous.
- More and more business and individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating 73
- More and more business and individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'necessaries'' or 'necessary's'?
Suggestion: necessaries'; necessary's
...difficult for humankind to remember all necessaries information, but with e-message people ...
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Line 3, column 647, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ital information to avoid misconception in future. For individuals, online communication ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2253.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67506297229 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31908881911 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554156171285 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7900516069 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2191566688 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835667639887 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770969161471 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145737733572 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319042379158 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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