It is believed that nowadays the particular states have a majority of younger than elderly people. Although, a lot of youth is a powerful workforce, however, they make pressure to the economy, political instability and stimulate world migration. In my opinion, having too many youth will lead to a global problems in the future.
A quarter of world population is minority at the age of 10-25, who are concentrated in the poorest countries, for example, India, while the wealthy and developed countries are aging. Firstly, young people of developing countries face with an unemployment and low salaries, because of low skills. In the result, it leads to the poverty. Secondly, Unstable younger are looking for a better life, so they do move to other cities and countries. In addition, they are a great risk for politicians, because they cannot be controlled by anyone.
On the other hand, increasing of younger is beneficial for developed, rich countries as a European. The average age is 45. In other words, growth of adolescent will expand the economy and give a chance not to ruin. For instance, young people will work and manufacture of the country will remain stable. Elderly people will get their pension without any fear. Therefore, it is important to have a lot of young men.
To conclude, some countries have a majority of adolescent in population than old people. Despite, power of youngster they might lead the country to the crisis. In my opinion, youth quantity must be balanced, otherwise it will lead to the global issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: many youths
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Suggestion: problem
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...se they cannot be controlled by anyone. On the other hand, increasing of younger...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99221789883 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78667687172 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56420233463 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6168792738 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4705882353 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58823529412 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101750328805 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031683184899 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398517280834 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615727737699 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309475807922 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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