At present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively a large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
It is believed that nowadays the particular states have more youngers than elderly people. Although, a lot of youth is a powerful workforce, however, they make pressure to the economics, political unstability and stimulate world migration. In my opinion having too many youth will lead to a global problems in the future.
A quoter of world population is minority at the age of 10-25, who are concentrated in the poorest countries while the wealthy and developed countries are aged. Firstly, young people of developing countries face with an unemployment and low salaries, because of low skills. In the result it lead to the poverty. Secondly, Unstable youngers are looking for a better life, so they do move to other cities and countries. In addition, they are a great risk for politicians, because they cannot be controlled by anyone.
On the other hand, increasing of youngers is beneficial for developed, rich countries as an European. The average age there is 45. In other words, growth of adolenscent will expand economy and give a chance not to ruin. For instance, young people will work and manufacture of the country wil remain stable. Elderly people will get their pension without any fear.
To conclude, some countries have majority of adolescent in population than old people. Despite, power of youngsters they might lead country to the crisis. In my opinion, youth quantity must be balanced, otherwise it will lead to the global issues.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-05 | gulbakhyt_90 | 61 | view |
- The two floor plans show the renovation of AAA Accountancy s main office Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words 39
- The diagrams below show two stages in the development of the mobile phone Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 70
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better 73
- The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree and employer s reasons for hiring them Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 64
- Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the economics, political unstability and stimulate world migration. In my opinion...
^^
Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun youth seems to be countable; consider using: 'many youths'.
Suggestion: many youths
...rld migration. In my opinion having too many youth will lead to a global problems in the f...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
...ng too many youth will lead to a global problems in the future. A quoter of world popu...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...because of low skills. In the result it lead to the poverty. Secondly, Unstable youn...
^^^^
Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se they cannot be controlled by anyone. On the other hand, increasing of younger...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ficial for developed, rich countries as an European. The average age there is 45. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10460251046 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78391441026 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598326359833 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1963853454 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9375 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106899151097 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331620350187 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438390328497 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635555571152 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358159810982 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.