The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.
Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates how many people were employed in the percentage in countries namely Australia, Switzerland, Iceland, The United Kingdom and The United States of America in the year 1995 and 2005.
Overall, employment rate among men and women rose in 2005 in comparison with 1995. Females work much less than males in the beginning of the period, while at the end of the period women of The USA, The UK and Switzerland excess level of working men in 1995.
Th majority of working men in 1995 was from Iceland and Switzerland and reached 70 percent and 65 percent of all male population of the country respectively. Meanwhile, employment rate among men in the United Kingdom and Australia was the lowest and was 55 percent in both countries in the year 1995. Men who worked in the United States of America were slightly more and reached about 58 percent. Men employment increased for 15 percent in the United Kingdom in the year 2005, it was the highest jump in comparison with other countries. The employment rate in the year 2005 rose approximately 12 percent in Australia, Switzerland and Iceland.
About 27 and 28 percent of women worked in the beginning of the period in New Zealand and Australia, while the same statistics in Switzerland was twice higher and contained about 56 percent. Half of women had jobs in the United Kingdom and 45 percent in the United States of America in 1995. The significance rose of employment among females was in New Zealand and the United States of America after 10 years. in other states growth was about 11 percent in Australia, Switzerland, Iceland and the United Kingdom.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 411, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 279.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88172043011 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6744164185 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.405017921147 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 283.868780488 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6544520937 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102080802719 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557739438267 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499972581767 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830838219694 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382123871147 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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