You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
say what action you would like the landlord to take
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
The map illustrates three options for building a leisure center.
Overall, in the map provided three sites which are A, B, and C for leisure center construction. Also, delta of river and transportation link is located in the map however, the site is not crowded or even populated.
according to the information locations A and B both have transportation link with road and located in the bank of river. While in the territory of location A is plant, which consists of five round buildings and two high tubes. Moreover, it produces a large amount of exhaust fumes. In the location B is located three houses without any infrastructure. there are fields nearby location B.
according to the data location C is on the left side of the map. location C is the furthest one from the riverside and road links, however there a lot of green forest. The territory C located in the highland in comparison with sites A and B.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-02-13 | Awadhesh Mourya | 69 | view |
| 2020-10-22 | HUUH | 56 | view |
| 2020-07-20 | abdulrahman ragab | view | |
| 2020-04-06 | Jiny Ju | view | |
| 2020-03-17 | Jiny Ju | 60 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
... is not crowded or even populated. according to the information locations A and B bo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 353, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...hree houses without any infrastructure. there are fields nearby location B. acco...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...here are fields nearby location B. according to the data location C is on the left s...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 66, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Location
...ation C is on the left side of the map. location C is the furthest one from the riversid...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ghland in comparison with sites A and B.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76397515528 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88767109319 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55900621118 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5058858269 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7272727273 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152345915072 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065356627504 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391102562074 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105023484495 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193253704352 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.