You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
THE DIAGRAM PREDICTS THE POSSIBLE LOCATION TO BUILD A RELAXING CENTRE IN THREE LOCATIONS: LOCATION A, NEAR A FACTORY, LOCATION B, NEAR A COMMUNITY AND LOCATION C, NEAR A JUNGLE.
LOCATION A IS NOT A SUITABLE PLACE TO ESTABLISH A RECREATIONAL CENTRE. AS THE PICTURE DEPICTS, WHITE AND BLACK FUMES CAN BE SEEN TO COME OUT OF THE PLANTS. AS THESE FUMES CAN CAUSE HARM TO THE VISITORS, THEY ARE LESS LIKELY TO GO AND SEE A LEISURE PLACE NEAR A MILL.
ALTHOUGH JUNGLE CAN BRING PEOPLE TO NEAR NATURE, MANY WILL NOT VISIT SUCH A PLACE WHICH LACKS A TRANSPORTATION ROAD. HOWEVER, INDIVIDUALS INTERESTED IN HIKING, TRAILING OR BACKPACKING MAY VISIT A LEISURE CENTRE NEAR
A FOREST. BUT THE PLACE IS BOUND TO HAVE LESS VISITORS THAN EXPECTED.
THE IDEAL PLACEMENT OF A RELAXING CENTRE IS NEAR OR WITHIN A SOCIETY, WHICH IS LOCATION B. THIS LOCATION PROVIDES A NON-TOXIC, ECO-FRIENDLY AND HEALHTY ENVIRONMENT, ALONG WITH ALL THE COMMODITIES NECESSARY FOR LIFE. THE GUESTS CAN BROWSE THROUGH INTERNET, GO TO SHOPPING MALLS OR ENJOY ANY OTHER FORM OF RECREATION WITHOUT ANY DISTURBENCE. SUCH LOCATION CAN HELP IN ADVERTISMENT OF THE BUSINESS AND BRING IN CUSTOMERS FROM BOTH LOCAL AND OUTSIDE TERITORY.
IN CONCLUSION, BOTH LOCATION B AND C WILL PROVIDE ENOUGH OPPORTUNITIES FOR THE GUESTS AND HOST TO COMPLETE THEIR BUSINESS WITHOUT ANY TROUBLES.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun VISITORS is countable.
Suggestion: Fewer
... FOREST. BUT THE PLACE IS BOUND TO HAVE LESS VISITORS THAN EXPECTED. THE IDEAL PL...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00444444444 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88397530854 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582222222222 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6616843779 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8333333333 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0949413206935 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343829227865 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333351229572 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469215964492 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036082789345 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.