You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter :-
* Describe the work you have been doing
* Explain why you can no longer do this work
* Recommend another person who is interested in this work
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I am unable to continue volunteering at your organization, Seattle Local Soup Kitchen, from next Monday. My responsibilities included serving soup and clearing the tables every Wednesday from 6 p.m. to 8 p.m.
Since my final exams and project submission deadlines are approaching, I will not be able to participate in the volunteer work. Even though I immensely enjoy the job, I need to spend more time studying for the examination. After I complete my semester, I would love to return. Meanwhile, I can recommend my friend as my replacement.
My friend Lily also enjoys volunteering, and she has worked in a soup kitchen before. I assure you she will be able to fulfill all the responsibilities without any problems or hesitation. She is available to cover all my shifts and is flexible if the schedule changes. I am attaching her details with this letter.
I look forward to hearing from you, and I hope you will take my recommendation under consideration
Yours faithfully
Bo Bi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke my recommendation under consideration Yours faithfully Bo Bi
^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...der consideration Yours faithfully Bo Bi
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06857142857 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23084117435 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685714285714 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.516123784 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159176495674 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570765517009 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594829848789 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999462794056 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450528368747 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.