You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working.
In your letter
1. Describe the work you have been doing
2. Explain why you can no longer do this work
3. Recommend another person who is interested in the work
Write at least 150 words
Dear Ben,
This is to regretfully inform you that I will not be able to continue my association as a teacher with your Non-Governmental organisation "Goonj". I currently teach English to underprivileged children in a local night school nearby. Additionally, I was also educating girls about personal hygiene. However, I will not be able to carry on.
The reason being, I am relocating to my own native country -India next week. my parents stay there and of late they are not keeping well so I have to go and take good care of them as they are also growing old. Hence, I will not be able to continue my voluntary work with quasi.
However, it would be my pleasure to introduce my junior from the same college. she is well-known to me and is actively involved in many charitable activities. she has expressed her interest to volunteer and I believe she will add a great value to your team.
I would like to thank every one of you who stood by me during my tenure and especially you for providing me such great opportunities. I wish every success to the organisation. Looking forward to working with you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Darwin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ben, This is to regretfully inform you that I...
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Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...owever, I will not be able to carry on. The reason being, I am relocating to my ...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...my own native country -India next week. my parents stay there and of late they are...
^^
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... continue my voluntary work with quasi. However, it would be my pleasure to intr...
^^^
Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...roduce my junior from the same college. she is well-known to me and is actively inv...
^^^
Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...involved in many charitable activities. she has expressed her interest to volunteer...
^^^
Line 4, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he will add a great value to your team. I would like to thank every one of you w...
^^^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...working with you soon. Yours sincerely, Darwin
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73631840796 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06587170599 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646766169154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5433113104 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168974631443 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531362019089 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584332070855 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920286430554 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484588251493 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.