Some people believe teaching children at home is best for child development while others thing that it is important for your child to go to school discuss advantages of both and give your opinion.
education plays a pivotal role in an individual’s life. however, in this recent era, there are different ways of teaching, few are in a favour of educating their kids at school to groom them properly where kids grasp fast by looking at other kids. On the other hand, few people prefer their kids to learn at home. I am going to discuss some advantages of both the approaches.
Firstly, let us take a look at the merits of home schooling. there are people who considers this method to be more beneficial for child’s growth. children at home get the personal attention from parents which results in good academic results. parents can focus on their kids and helps them in the area where more attention is required as they are very much aware of their child’s weaknesses. Thus it can be said that children at home can learn their subjects at their pace.
On the other hand, many consider school to be the best place to learn things quickly and in a more efficient manner. children learn quickly by looking at other children. Moreover, schools focus on personality development as well as on the moral values also. they perform tasks in a team enabling them to learn teamwork. Now a days, school have a concept of e-classes, smart classes which introduces a child to a whole new level and can motivate them to develop their interest in a particular field at a very young age. they can outshine in sports as well by representing their school, country at a national level. Furthermore, a child should be introduce to hardships of life too rather than keeping him/her in a protective environment.
taking everything into consideration, I would say that both the points have its own merits. however, in order to survive in this world, students should be motivated to study at school instead of studying at home. Although, Government should enforce law to make attendance mandatory at school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86196319018 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75011761576 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567484662577 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5487565274 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4210526316 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1578947368 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253234882615 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810293422467 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524512379138 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147872306028 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285054518013 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.