For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership.
Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter
• state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this
• give details on how you have benefited from the club
• explain why you want to leave
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr Ben,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the discontinuation of my annual membership in your club "Gold gym & Spa". I was an exultant member of your club. I enrolled two years back and after the first year my membership was upgraded to Silver with annual upgradation fees of 200 us dollars, paid in advance. I regret to inform you that I will not be able to continue the association. To elucidate, due to my work commitments, I am moving to Singapore as I have shifted my base now.
being a premium member of the club, I was privileged to use all the facilities such as swimming pool, jogging track and gym. The club has arranged numerous programs such as yoga, Zumba, which I am very fond of and has benefitted several numbers of people. I have enjoyed my time here and it has become a significant part of my daily routine.
I am sorry to inform you that I will not be able to continue my relationship with the club. The reason being I am shifting to Singapore soon. Therefore, I would not be able to continue any activities here so requesting you to refund me the deposit of 150 dollars which was due upon the cancellation of the membership.
Looking to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Dennis
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mr Ben, I am writing this letter to inform you a...
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...o Silver with annual upgradation fees of 200 us dollars, paid in advance. I regre...
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...es of 200 us dollars, paid in advance. I regret to inform you that I will not be...
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...ingapore as I have shifted my base now. being a premium member of the club, I wa...
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...apore as I have shifted my base now. being a premium member of the club, I was pri...
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...a significant part of my daily routine. I am sorry to inform you that I will not...
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...pon the cancellation of the membership. Looking to hearing from you. Yours sin...
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... to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Dennis
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54708520179 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80429642582 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578475336323 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6955333897 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263658107566 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948233989929 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615032256724 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160726514399 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071171233199 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.