You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter,
* state your reason for writing
*describe the problems and explain how you feel
*propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to update you about my complaint about the heating system in my room. To elucidate, the central heating system and the geyser of my room is not working from the past few days and there is no progress on the same. The company engineers have visited my place and thoroughly checked the circuit. However, they could not find the issue.
Now, on the onset of winters, climate is already changed so much and it really gets difficult without the hot water for showers. In addition, I am expecting some guests over the weekend, so requesting you to save me from the embarrassment. I am not available at home during the day. In order to get it rectified, the greatest support what I can give is that I can lend you my keys. Probably, you can just let me know about the day and time of their appointment.
Looking forward to get a prompt response from you.
Yours sincerely,
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to getting'.
Suggestion: to getting
... of their appointment. Looking forward to get a prompt response from you. Yours sinc...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51807228916 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48946102012 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656626506024 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5253082643 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1818181818 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142956976733 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473748320726 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287912303693 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889591386372 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311981241364 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.