The young people in the workforce are changing their jobs or careers every few years. What do you think are the reasons? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, employees have a tendency to switch professions in a yearly basis and many believe that this has a beneficial impact on their income. In this essay, I will describe several reasons and explain why this alternation has more merits than demerits.
The main reason for this change is a better opportunity. In the modern society, all youngsters are trained to become qualified and competent. However, new workers are inexperienced and will be incapable of competing against former employees. Therefore, they have to endure a low payment for the first few years. After a required amount of time, they will discover chances and positions that match their effort. A recent survey announced that 81% of young individuals decided to switch to a different career because they feel underappreciated in the former profession.
As a result, corporations losing former workers will have an unfavourable gap. Since these employees are prepared for years, they know what has to be done in that position. Newcomers are unskilled and that company will oblige to restart the entire training process.
However, this action enhances workers’ ability and affecting society development. People who are imprisoned in the same position cannot liberate and execute new ideas. For instance, a researcher working in a repetitive protocol will find it harder to develop solutions and findings. Moreover, the alternation of professional fields encourages workers to seek for aptitude and the position that they can truly excel. This helps the society to eliminate incompetent employees and acquire passionate, sufficient workers for the field.
Indeed, this alternation is not only beneficial for the person themselves but rather to that to the society.
In conclusion, regarding the factor that influence young workers’ decision, it is more advantageous to change professions after a certain amount of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53401360544 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00482435608 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7018963562 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.3888888889 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.077813583056 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249285420604 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291720747106 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0408239879211 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318668970649 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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