Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It's undeniable the fact that nowadays children gain knowledge and entertain themselves by reading different books and by watching tv programs and by playing games on computers. However, there are many people who assert that reading books is more beneficial than television programs and computer games for juveniles. I strongly agree with this statement. I shall discuss this topic deeply in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, there are multifarious benefits of reading books. First and foremost, reading books enhance children's imagination power and their creativity. For instance, when children read stories, they imagine the scenes and characters in their mind due to which their imagination power is increased. Moreover, children's language abilities is also inclined such as children learn various vocabulary words and grammar when they read books. Besides this, by reading different stories children learn different virtues of their life such as communication skills, how to accept victory and defeat with the same strength and how to become good person.
On the flip side, watching tv and playing games on computer is also lucrative
for the kids. With the help of these gadgets,they can watch visual scenes by which they can learn easily anything at anytime. but, when children use these gadgets they become addicted to these things as a result of which their mind is diverted from their education becaue they spend lot of their time on it. Moreover, it also laid exacerbating impact on their eyes which is actually not good for their health.
Laconically, it can be said that no doubt watching tv and computer games also improve children's cognitive abilities but reading books is far better than children's development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38545454545 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66393358565 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8057373676 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.785714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286675807053 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10867496945 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956119610751 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19873953359 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954275479916 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.