People spend a lot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before.
Is it a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, people are able to spend more money for buying goods because of higher income than the past. Some people claim that this event is not positive, while other thinks opposite of this idea. It seems to me that, it is a beneficial development both for people themselves and community.
About the people, the aim of life for anyone is reaching to the comfort and welfare. One of the ways for accessing to this state is having money and its expend.
If individuals can purchase easily everything, it creates a sense of satisfying arbitrarily. This situation helps you to be less aggressive, and also assist to reduction of mentally illness. In addition, when people earn more money, they can eat healthier foods and likewise will be able to checked up themselves in the shorter period of time. One of the important results of this is, increasing of life expectance.
People’s ability in buying more commodities will help to the society too. It leads to create more jobs and economic growths. For instance, when people cost for buying a commodity, relative company have to procreate more product. Consequently, an employer enforce to employ more workers. With doing this, the number of unemployed will reduce considerably. As another result of this action is reduction in the amount of crime since, one of the main reasons of committing a crime is poverty and unemployment.
To sum up, in my opinion if individuals spend more money for buying everything, it will have positive impacts not only for people themselves, but also for society. For this reason, I think it is a positive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 329, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...to checked up themselves in the shorter period of time. One of the important results of this i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, likewise, so, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02602230483 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80859385538 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583643122677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7961091455 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5294117647 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20630931693 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631595743172 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696738977677 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120442157729 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502916072386 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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