The questing states that money is crucial in many person's lives. However few think it is more important than the rest. What do i feel are the correct uses of income? are their any other factors that are crucial for a happy life? weather we believe or not money plays a huge role in our life's but it should be used for only our requirements but not excessively and there exits different factors rather than money for a better life.
As we all know now we are in a corporate world now,so for surviving we need to earn money through a job because we need to fulfill our daily needs. so money plays a big role in our live's. Although few think money as a drug which needs to be consumed more and more for their own needs,this happens because of some people's greedy nature who want to earn more money so that they can order others to do work with this they gain power over others and some do it to show off their lavish status.
In my opinion money should be gives same importance as other basic human needs because we evolved from early man not by the usage of money but by showing emotions and concern towards others.money is required for our basic needs like food,water and other products which we use often but not for lavish spending. An old man with his family lives near by my home he earns 250$ a month and leads a happy life without any problems because he gave less importance in earning more money.
In conclusion money should be given same priority as other basic needs. because there are other aspects which are more important than money such as love,affections and emotions which define a humanbeing.These factors result in happiness of a person's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34194817628 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529605263158 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.2790020435 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272030637174 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105966752638 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489382400558 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176827094073 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236915638884 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.