The Internet when used as a source of information, has more drawbacks than advantages.To what extent do you agree with this statement?
There are different opinions about the information received from the Internet. Some say the disadvantages of this source of information are greater than its benefits.l will state my opinion in the following paragraphs.
Most people today use the internet as a source of information. This information can be outdated and therefore cannot be used as a document.For example, there are websites that have not been updated, and when you refer to them, you are faced with a bunch of unpleasant information.On the other hand, this information may be incorrect and people have posted material on the Internet-based on their experiences.As we look for a cure for the disease on the Internet, we get information that may make the patient's condition worse than it is to help cure the disease.
It is true that information on the Internet has disadvantages, but we must admit that it is the most important source of information worldwide today.And that when we can't find a number we can easily find it with one click on the internet.And to write an article, we don't have to spend hours reading different articles in the library or having to buy all these articles.Because we can get all the information we need by visiting a reputable website.For example, I had to read many books to write my dissertation, but with a search on the internet and finding the information I needed, I was able to complete my dissertation in one day instead of a week.
In conclusion,I believe that despite the disadvantages of Internet resources, the Internet has a lot of use in human life.
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- School teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- You have rented a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students.However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing.You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom.Write a letter 87
- Obesity was once considered a disease of adults;however, it is becoming increasingly common among children.Why do you think this is happening?What can be done to help children stay healthy? 84
- Some businesses prohibit smoking in any of their offices.Some governments have banned smoking in all public places.Do you agree or disagree that this is the right course of action?Give reasons for your opinion. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92105263158 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18554179413 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541353383459 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 229.603825462 49.4020404114 465% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.166666667 106.682146367 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.3333333333 20.7667163134 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 7.06120827912 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193114894222 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119960080572 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589183184714 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124762313696 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517520370293 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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