For the past year, you have been a member of a local club.Now you want to discontinue your membership.
Write a letter to the club secretary.In your letter
state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this.
give details on how you have benefited from the club.
explain why you want to leave.
Dear Mr behzadi,
I am a citizen of Tehran and live near your club on Shhi Street.I am writing a letter about my membership.
I have been a member of your club for a year and have worked in a variety of dances at the club.Of course, I was mostly involved in ice skating and salsa dancing.I work in a construction company for 5 years. I had a high salary in the company. As a result, I was able to fully charge my membership fee.
I love to dance. And by joining the club I was able to get to know most of the dances and most importantly all the cultures of different countries.And on the other hand, my social connections increased and I made many friends.
I met someone at the club who is the vice president of a large construction company in Dubai. He offered me a great job at their company.
I want to accept this offer and move to Dubai for further work. Because I know this will make most of my wishes. And for that I can no longer be a member of your club. Thank you for your efforts.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible
Yours sincerely,
Daniali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... and live near your club on Shhi Street.I am writing a letter about my membership...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g a letter about my membership. I have been a member of your club for a ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I have been a member of your club for a year and have worked in a variety of d...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Of
...rked in a variety of dances at the club.Of course, I was mostly involved in ice sk...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...volved in ice skating and salsa dancing.I work in a construction company for 5 ye...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...all the cultures of different countries.And on the other hand, my social connection...
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Line 21, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fer and move to Dubai for further work. Because I know this will make most of my wishes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, of course, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33971291866 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52496520372 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588516746411 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9394888539 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7692307692 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294483639002 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896727269016 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957529393731 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125157860297 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888251284125 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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