You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :Give detail of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.

Dear Mr. Benz

I am writing to ask if you would be willing to write a letter of reference in support of my job application. I am one of your old students from the 2018 class.

I have been searching for a job since i completed my studies and now i have been shortlisted for an interview at a top software company and i have to submit a letter of reference from a former professor. Since you know my strengths and weaknesses better than anyone else, i thought you are the right person for this job.

The job profile matches perfectly the one i always wanted. I will be working as a java developer. As you know, Java has always been my passion and this opportunity will help me start my career in the field i have always wanted to be.

If you should decide to write a reference letter for me, i would like to mention my positive traits such as my ability to learn quickly, my punctuality and my enthusiasm in addition to my academic skills.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely
Jack

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ur old students from the 2018 class. I have been searching for a job since i c...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I have been searching for a job since i completed my studies and now i have bee...
^
Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...and weaknesses better than anyone else, i thought you are the right person for th...
^
Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ide to write a reference letter for me, i would like to mention my positive trait...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, thus, in addition, such as, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47692307692 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62448892993 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9492308963 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3636363636 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201901218121 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880236557929 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514682905723 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11717961588 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537780997909 0.0580467560999 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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