The line graph shows different average daily maximum temperatures throughout the year for Auckland and Christchurch, New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, the United Kingdom.
Auckland and Christchurch both recorded wanner temperatures during January and February of approximately 24°c and 23°c respectively. The temperatures in both cities then dropped steadily, reaching a low of 15°c in Auckland in July and in August and ll°c in Christchurch in July before beginning to rise back up to just over 20°c in December.
In contrast, the data for London and Edinburgh shows a temperature slightly above 5°c during January, prior to climbing to a peak of about 23°c during July in London and approximately 18°c in Edinburgh during the same month. The temperatures for both cities then dipped to approximately 7°c and 6°c in December respectively.
Overall, the average daily maximum temperatures of the two cities in New Zealand show completely the opposite pattern to the two British citics, although British cities had lower temperatures than New Zealand on the whole, regardless of season.
- The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in United Kingdom.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 11
- Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think younger leaders would be better. Do you agree or disagree. 56
- The bar chart below shows the number of employees from the European Union in the United States (1999). 56
- Central and local government make a frantic attempt to promote festivals to create a lot of revenue Some people think this money should be invested in social programs for the poor 92
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, in contrast, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51461988304 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08333021387 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53216374269 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0294032887 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.166666667 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446601316329 0.215688989381 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216944283427 0.103423049105 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157752144222 0.0843802449381 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287274702599 0.15604864568 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153191619048 0.0819641961636 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.