Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.
It is believed that in the past humans were slimmer and more active than now. This essay will describe the major reasons and the ways to solve obesity.
About 40 percent of world population suffers from obesity, including toddlers and elderly people. There are some causes of overweight people. Firstly, men do not do enough exercises. It happens because of industrial development. The cars and technologies make humans move rarely than they used to. Therefore, men became lazy and inactive. Secondly, increasing fast food leads us, human, to gain extra weight. In other words, young and old reduce eating a healthy nutrition food and become fat. Finally, bad habits, as drinking alcohol and smoking cigarettes, make people fatter because of the countless calories. One pinch of beer, for example, contains about 250-300 calories, which is equal to the entire dinner. Those are the causes of dramatically rising of obese men.
Some possible solutions to this problem are following healthy lifestyle and keeping diet. One of the most efficient methods of being fit is doing exercises regular. By exercise I do not mean speed running or other extreme activities. It is enough just walk an hour every day. Moreover, if somebody gives up smoking and especially drinking alcohol beverages, he or she will lose weight faster. Another way is eating right food, for example, fruits, vegetables, right proportion of protein and carbohydrates. All this simple resolutions will make anyone slim and healthy.
To conclude, currently, people become inactive and obese in comparison with the past, because of lack of the physical exercises and consuming fast food. However, we can reduce obesity in the world by keeping diet and changing style of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually put before the verb 'move'.
Suggestion: rarely move
.... The cars and technologies make humans move rarely than they used to. Therefore, men becam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25978647687 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59645064617 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67615658363 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0015673558 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.1818181818 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7727272727 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129528178063 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334610987207 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445466679599 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735473248949 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198574174328 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.34 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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