You live in a room in a college where you share it with another student. You find it very difficult to study and work there because your roommate always has friends visiting. He/she has parties in the room and sometimes borrows your things without asking you.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that the room I am staying is not at all comfortable. While the place and neighbors are good, my roommate has been unacceptable. Because of this nuisance, I am not able to concentrate on my work. I hope you will consider my situation favorably.
Let me explain my situation. The present housemate moved in 3 months back and from the day he moved into the problem started. I never had any issues with my old housemate. My current housemate, however, drinks every day in the room and plays loud music all throughout the night. As such, I am not getting enough sleep from the past few months. Even though I tried to sleep, the loud noise made it hard to sleep. As I was not able to sleep, I was not able to concentrate on my work.
Would you kindly give a warning to my present housemate or transfer me to a new room? I would prefer to live with anyone who is quieter and more sensible to other personal spaces.
Thank you for consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Sai.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55555555556 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61017684298 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9869104073 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.4 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86666666667 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1625228495 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547192861225 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454441455408 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109879066433 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406886009249 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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